Portrait #2

Drawing \ Figure | 10/20/05 @135 | eXcetra | critiques (12) | views (1261)

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HB pencil on paper, approximately 4 to 6 hours of work. Reference used (will scan it once I get the chance). Contrast and levels slighly adjusted on photoshop (cuz my scanner sux 0_0 ). I'm quite pleased with how it turned out, this is (for now) my best piece, technical-wise and I can't wait for it to get even better~ ^^

As usual, critiques and comments are welcome and appreciated. Enjoy~

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badpixa

10/20/05 @285

well done. expecially the eyes are absolutely cool. 7/7

JapiHonoo

10/20/05 @445

i love her eyes.. very good draw +9

Andy--Jones

10/21/05 @126

Very well drawn. You have good technique. I cant say how well it resembles the model though. But nice pencil skills, keep it up...only 16, the only way is up!

JESR

10/22/05 @216

i like too her eyes, it looks awesome. +10/10

eXcetra

10/22/05 @253

Thanks a lot for all your comments ^^ ..I'm trying my best to improve as much as possible so if you guys have any critiques whatsoever, feel free.

Beckett

10/23/05 @518

I agree with Andy, you are only 16, you will get a lot better as you get older. Just keep pacticing

This is already great

rifty

10/30/05 @855

i find it good, but you have to work on the shading.. a little bit more contrast on her skin and hair will be great.. the proportions of her arm and neck aren't perfeckt, but I know how difficult it is. keep drawing..

aureliecorre

11/01/05 @415

The shading work is not enough in my opinions. You've been missing some shades to actually make it more lifelike. It seems that her neck is a bit too thin like rifty said.

Anyway, pretty eyes. Keep practice you are going on the right path

dragiona

11/12/05 @134

Wow,very beautiful,i want to kiss the lips,attractive eyes,you have very deep technique,i like that

Amik

11/12/05 @254

wow! i really love this picture! wowwow!
the model wonderful and you did a great job drawing her.
lovely!

Kaduflyer

12/11/05 @753

I'm not sure a point by point critique of this would be of any value.....just be aware that there are faults and try rectify them on the next one.

All in all though there is way more here to praise than to critisise...wish I had been this good at 16!

Well done.

Cigaro

02/01/06 @755

great job

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